The history of Deaf education in New Zealand has heavily influenced attitudes by the Deaf community towards Oralism and technology advances like cochlear implants which would seek to 'fix' the Deaf person.
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| A speech therapy lesson: trying to learn when you can hear neither the example, nor your own attempt. |
While pure Oralism has not been the recommended approach for Deaf education in New Zealand since the 1970's, the belief that allowing a deaf child to learn sign language will damage their English acquisition and assimilation with hearing peers prevails amongst much of the medical community. Keep in mind that this belief was at the cutting edge in the 1880's, and dismisses numerous examples of evidence during the past 133 years which strongly suggest to the contrary. This belief is often passed onto parents by the 'professionals' when their child is identified as deaf, and when we consider that around 90% of deaf children are born to hearing parents, it is likely that most of those parents haven't had exposure to the Deaf community and are unaware of alternative options than those presented by medical specialists.
The introduction of cochlear implants (CIs) added a new dimension to an already complex debate. On the surface there are compelling examples of CI 'success stories', but looking deeper they are not always the miracle 'cure' they're often portrayed to be. As well as the health risks associated with CI surgery (including bacterial meningitis), implantation is only the beginning of a long and challenging journey. First the CI must be individually programmed, and then begins Auditory Verbal Therapy (AVT), a process to make sense of the sound they're perceiving, which can be a long, unpleasant and sometimes fruitless journey, for both the child and their family (who must take on the primary teaching role). Being aware that CI outcomes differ substantially between individuals according to a range of factors, not all of which can't be predicted, shouldn't we be strengthening chances for success by arming people with multiple tools to succeed?
Rudimentary consideration of sign language considers it a tool for those who don't experience the expected success with CIs; comprehensive consideration strongly suggests that there are numerous benefits to using sign language regardless of CI outcomes.



In the interests of keeping within the recommended word count, yes, you could edit the history content, but it's probably good to retain the most pertinent parts -- oralism, its duration perhaps, its enduring "legacies" -- as they are relevant to your argument.
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid I took "Oralism and cochlear implants" to mean there is a link between the two. If there is, you may need to tease out the relationship a bit more in this section...? I assume it would have been added on to the last paragraph where you start "The introduction of cochlear implants (CIs) added a new dimension...." Take care that you use your apostrophes consistently (CIs vs CI's) and maybe give a short description explaining what a cochlear implant is.
Where you say "worse educational outcomes" it might be better to say "poor...", otherwise there is an expectation of the comparison to follow -- worse than what? Or supply the comparison, I guess.
A minor point: where you state "...a surprising number who support...", do you think you need to indicate a number of what -- educational professionals, parents, people?
Hi Ana,
DeleteThanks for the feedback! Yes, I definitely need to trim the history part and focus more on the current situation with CIs, since that's more relevant to my topic. Tricky knowing what to cut when it all seems very relevant to the current debate!
Thanks for the grammatical reminders, I'll definitely check for consistency of CIs vs CI's in the proofreading stage once I've finished the actual content/structure. I've linked to a page which explains about what a CI is, for the purpose of word count as much as anything else! In the new content I write which is focused more around CIs I will try to mention the pertinent issues with them, but with the word count it's pretty challenging to cover everything (as you know!).